From f62b04cfac5cbb72536d3d92f297995fc5a383ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Luke Murphy Date: Mon, 23 Nov 2020 11:12:52 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Small copy tweaks - typos and grammar for english text --- app/index.html | 24 ++++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/index.html b/app/index.html index 2346fd4..1835755 100644 --- a/app/index.html +++ b/app/index.html @@ -109,14 +109,14 @@ class="headline headline--s-width headline--centered headline--b-margin" >

- Biobulkbende is an association completely run by the members. + Biobulkbende is an association completely run by its members. Together we collectively purchase organic food from local producers and distributors.

In the context of the current food system, with all its flaws and vulnerabilities, we believe it is important to have more control - over the food we buy and consume. Food doesnt have to be treated + over the food we buy and consume. Food does not have to be treated strictly as a commodity, access to food doesn't have to rely on impenetrable logistics systems, and overwhelming packaging does not have to be the norm. Access to high quality, organic and affordable @@ -153,7 +153,7 @@

Inspired by the Amsterdam food co-op Vokomokum, The Park Slope co-op and many others, our co-op is run on a volunteer-basis by all - members. As members of this co-op, we all conribute a small part of + members. As members of this co-op, we all contribute a small part of our time in order to keep our co-op running according to our values: building a community, sharing organic food, sourcing ingredients that is are not produced through any exploitation of labour and are @@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ />

- We come together every first monday of the month from 18:00 to 20:00 + We come together every first Monday of the month from 18:00 to 20:00 at the Wijkcoop010 in de Zomerhofstraat 75, ZOHO. People who are interested to become a member can join the introduction at 19:00. @@ -212,7 +212,7 @@

We are happy to have new members at the moment. Send us an email or simply drop - by on our next pickup day and say hello! + by on our next pick-up day and say hello!

@@ -248,10 +248,10 @@ the benefit of the whole. A food co-op is a group of people that buy food from (local) suppliers of their own choosing. A collective do-it-with-others supermarket.

- BioBulkBende members order collectively from local + Biobulkbende members order collectively from local suppliers and distributors. This means we get as close to the wholesale prices as possible by cutting out middle men and - ordering in bulk. BioBulkBende exists only through the + ordering in bulk. Biobulkbende exists only through the cooperation of the members involved. There is no profit and everyone in the community contributes to the co-op on a volunteer basis. @@ -292,9 +292,9 @@ As a member of Biobulkbende, you have access to high-quality organic food, straight from the producers and / or distributors, at much lower prices than in the supermarket. In return, you pay - a membership fee of 15 euros and contribute a bit of your time - and energy each month (3h ±) to keep our co-op running. As a - member of the co-op you have a say in how the co-op works, how + a membership fee of €15 and contribute a bit of your time and + energy each month (3h±) to keep our co-op running. As a member + of the co-op you have a say in how the co-op works, how decisions are made and what direction we take together.

@@ -382,10 +382,10 @@ bulk packaging. Fresh food doesn't have to be in bulk. We also have items that are popular, like oats, in stock to save costs and plastic! Payment is done during pick-up day through - banktransfer or pin. For ordering, we use a free software called + bank transfer or pin. For ordering, we use a free software called Foodsoft . You can learn more about how to order by joining us at any upcoming - pickup day. + pick-up day.