From 614b573de34e71ad2c8a74e6489d37d81e8ebe7d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Luke Murphy Date: Sat, 2 Jan 2021 02:45:49 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] More wording --- docs/index.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/index.md b/docs/index.md index e3e53f1..72b37c4 100644 --- a/docs/index.md +++ b/docs/index.md @@ -15,13 +15,13 @@ extractive forces brings the idea of offering an alternative into question. [The technological crisis is a social crisis]. Therefore, building an alternative digital future cannot be done without broad and meaningful -cooperation. The Cooperative Cloud project takes as its starting point the +cooperation. The Cooperative Cloud project takes as its starting point, the independent free software community standards, tools, approaches and governance -methods in order to build up a platform which cooperatives can make use of as -part of offering a real alternative. +methods which make up the platform which cooperatives can make use of as part +of offering a real alternative. The Cooperative Cloud should not be seen as a technical solution for a social -problem (i.e. "Big Tech"). We understand that owning the common technological +problem (i.e. "Big Tech"). We understsand that owning the common technological means for delivering free software is only one part of the struggle to reclaim technology today. If antitrust litigation dismantled the monopolies tomorrow, we'd need our own organisations and robust technical capacity to fill the