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<h2 class="headline__title">
Biobulkbende is an association completely run by the members.
Biobulkbende is an association completely run by its members.
Together we collectively purchase organic food from local producers
and distributors.
</h2>
<h2 class="headline__subtitle">
In the context of the current food system, with all its flaws and
vulnerabilities, we believe it is important to have more control
over the food we buy and consume. Food doesnt have to be treated
over the food we buy and consume. Food does not have to be treated
strictly as a commodity, access to food doesn't have to rely on
impenetrable logistics systems, and overwhelming packaging does not
have to be the norm. Access to high quality, organic and affordable
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<h2 class="headline__subtitle">
Inspired by the Amsterdam food co-op Vokomokum, The Park Slope co-op
and many others, our co-op is run on a volunteer-basis by all
members. As members of this co-op, we all conribute a small part of
members. As members of this co-op, we all contribute a small part of
our time in order to keep our co-op running according to our values:
building a community, sharing organic food, sourcing ingredients
that is are not produced through any exploitation of labour and are
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<h2 class="headline__subtitle">
We come together every first monday of the month from 18:00 to 20:00
We come together every first Monday of the month from 18:00 to 20:00
at the Wijkcoop010 in de <b>Zomerhofstraat 75</b>, <b>ZOHO</b>.
People who are interested to become a member can join the
introduction at 19:00.
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<p>
We are happy to have new members at the moment. Send us an
<a href="mailto: info@biobulkbende.org">email</a> or simply drop
by on our next pickup day and say hello!
by on our next pick-up day and say hello!
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the benefit of the whole. A food co-op is a group of people
that buy food from (local) suppliers of their own choosing. A
collective do-it-with-others supermarket.<br /><br />
<b>BioBulkBende</b> members order collectively from local
<b>Biobulkbende</b> members order collectively from local
suppliers and distributors. This means we get as close to the
wholesale prices as possible by cutting out middle men and
ordering in bulk. BioBulkBende exists only through the
ordering in bulk. Biobulkbende exists only through the
cooperation of the members involved. There is no profit and
everyone in the community contributes to the co-op on a
volunteer basis.
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As a member of Biobulkbende, you have access to high-quality
organic food, straight from the producers and / or distributors,
at much lower prices than in the supermarket. In return, you pay
a membership fee of 15 euros and contribute a bit of your time
and energy each month (3h ±) to keep our co-op running. As a
member of the co-op you have a say in how the co-op works, how
a membership fee of 15 and contribute a bit of your time and
energy each month (3h±) to keep our co-op running. As a member
of the co-op you have a say in how the co-op works, how
decisions are made and what direction we take together.
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bank transfer or pin. For ordering, we use a free software called
<a href="https://foodcoops.net"> <b> Foodsoft </b> </a>. You can
learn more about how to order by joining us at any upcoming
pickup day.
pick-up day.
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