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<header class="major">
<h2>Autonomic is a co-operative<br />
that is owned and run by its workers</h2>
<p>We are committed to a set of core values to build progressive technologies<br /> and
infrastructure that empower users to make a positive impact on the world</p>
<p>We build technologies and infrastructure to empower users to make a positive</br>
impact on the world. All of our services reflect our commitment to our core values:</p>
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<div class="inner">
<header class="major">
<h2>Services we offer</h2>
<p>We design integrated infrastructure tailored to your needs utilising technologies from<br />the
<p>We design integrated infrastructure tailored to your needs using technologies from<br />the
best free and open source software projects available. Your data under your control. <br />Here are some examples of the
applications we have deployed for our clients (insert link to clients page).</p>
applications we have deployed for <a href="/clients">our clients</a>.</p>
</header>
<ul class="features">
<li class="icon fa-paper-plane-o">
<h3>Encrypted Email Server</h3>
<h3>Encrypted Email</h3>
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</li>
<li class="icon fa-rocket2">
<h3>Rocket.Chat</h3>
<h3>Text and Video Chat</h3>
<p>Private chat room for your group built on <a href="//rocket.chat">Rocket.Chat</a>. Chat over video, audio and text, and share links and files, from your mobile, desktop, or any web browser.</p>
</li>
<li class="icon fa-bar-chart">
<h3>Interactive Data Visualisation</h3>
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</li>
<li class="icon fa-code">
<h3>Visual Data</h3>
<li class="icon fa-map-o">
<h3>Interactive Mapping</h3>
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</li>
<li class="icon fa-headphones">
<h3>Mumble Voice Chat</h3>
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<h3>Voice Chat</h3>
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</li>
<li class="icon fa-heart-o">
<h3>Discourse Forum</h3>
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</li>
<li class="icon fa-flag-o">
<h3>Interactive Mapping</h3>
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<li class="icon fa-comments-o">
<h3>Forum and Mailing Lists</h3>
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</ul>
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