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 date: 2019-08-30
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-A couple of our clients use [CiviCRM](https://civicrm.org/); one of them uses
-the "Mailing" features to send out emails to their supporters.  Apparently,
-they're facing a bug where if someone sends out a Mailing with the same name
-(not subject line, just the internal identifier 🙄) as an existing one, it'll
-freeze the CRM later.
+Some of our clients use [CiviCRM](https://civicrm.org/) which is a popular open source "constituent relationship management" platform; 
+one of those clients uses the "Mailing" features to send out emails to their supporters.  We found out they're experiancing a bug where a user sends out a mailing with the same name (not subject line, just the internal identifier 🙄) as an existing mailing, it'll cause the CRM to 
+freeze up at a later time.
 
-As an added challenge, the Mailings feature of CiviCRM [now uses
-AngularJS](https://docs.civicrm.org/dev/en/latest/framework/angular/) following
-a recent rebuild, and there aren't many tutorials or examples out there.
-Luckily, the CiviCRM developer community was super-helpful, and we managed to
-sort out some in-form validation to prevent duplicate Mailing
-names for our client… and now for you, too!
+As an added challenge, the mailings feature of CiviCRM [now use AngularJS](https://docs.civicrm.org/dev/en/latest/framework/angular/) following a recent rebuild by the developers, and there aren't many tutorials or examples out there of workarounds to this issue. Luckily, the CiviCRM developer community was super-helpful, and we managed to sort out some in-form validation to prevent duplicate mailing names for our client and now for you, too!
 
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